Author: Slik Nixin
What defines great lyrics?
But most of all what makes them great is the emotional response they bring out in your listeners. Great rap lyrics can make you cry. They can make you laugh. They can lift you up, bring you down and everything else in between.
A good example of the emotional component that lies in all great lyrics can be seen from a song I wrote a year ago called “Scapegoat”. The song is about the chaos of life and feeling lost in the world with music being the only outlet to escape through.
It’s always interesting when I play this song for someone because his or her emotional response to it tells me so much about that person.
For example, about two months ago I had a female vocalist over my house and I played her this song. Halfway through it she busted out crying to the point where she had to excuse herself from the room and regain her composure.
Once she re-entered the room I asked her what was wrong. She immediately opened up and told me about all of the current problems she was going through and then it was easy to see how the lyrics of that song related to her life’s situation.
After she left, I had the chance to really sit down and think about it and the revelation that came to me was simple. This song was exactly what the name and lyrics said it was – a scapegoat for the pain she had bottled up inside. The lyrics triggered an emotional response that was so overwhelming she burst into tears. The connection between her and song was obvious and it was this connection that made these lyrics great.
Here are the lyrics to the chorus in that song:
Lost are the fun days and wild nights
Wordplay is the clever use or manipulation of words in some fashion. Great rappers use wordplay to hold the listeners attention and to demonstrate their mastery as a wordsmith.
Lets look at this very short phrase as an example of ‘a play on words’.
…”I’m the dick, with the dick, she’s addicted too”…
If we disregard the vulgarity of the statement, for educational purposes, what we have is a double meaning on the word dick and clever word-play (usage) of the word addicted to bring attention to the line by playing off the word used in the double meaning..
Here’s an example of how effective imagery can be. This is me describing my surrounding environment last Saturday night.
Late night - Lots of girls dancing – loud music – VIP section in the back – People buying drinks – etc…
If you had to guess, you would probably say I was at some sort of nightclub – and you would be correct.
How did you know I was at a club? You knew because I used words and phrases that described a club-like environment. In doing so, you were then able to create a mental picture of it and that mental picture should’ve looked something like a nightclub.
One component of imagery in writing that most people don’t even know exists is the way it actively engages the listener in their own personal experiences.
For instance, If I’m reading a passage from a book (with no pictures) and the passage is describing a big field of green grass down an old dirt road in Oklahoma – chances are I haven’t seen that actual field, but I have seen a similar field at some point in my life. So, what the brain will do when creating a mental picture of the described imagery is draw on the memories of times that I have come across similar fields of grass and it is those memories that will be used in conjunction with the written details to create this image.
When using imagery in your lyrics you are allowing your listener to create their own world based off the things you describe and the things in their past experiences they can relate to that description, which makes it an extremely powerful component to writing great lyrics.
“He tried to tell me that the show don’t stop
Now, lets break down the metaphor.
- Bullets are made of lead,
You should start to see the commonalities that make this line a metaphor. Even though shooting someone and the metal on robocop’s chest are two completely different things we have cleverly made them appear to be related.
Perfect Rhymes VS. Similar Rhymes
A good example of a perfect rhyme is cool and school.
A good example of a similar rhyme is cool and to or cool and view.
The use of Similar rhymes is vital in rap lyrics because they give the rapper a lot more creative freedom to roam in their lyrical content.
Imagine if every time you wanted to rhyme something with the word cool the only rhyme choices you had were school, bull, pull, drool, and fool. This might be okay in the beginning but over time the creativity of your lyrical content would be severely limited and most likely redundant.
Filler Lines VS. Punch Lines
Filler lines are basically generic rhymes that are either used to keep the momentum going or to setup punch-lines. But they typically don’t have the “Wow” factor of a hard hitting punch-line.
Punch-lines are those prized lyrics that really grab your attention. They hit you dead in the chest and leave a lasting impression.
On the Battle Rap Circuit an amazing punch-line is referred to as a Quotable. Quotables are lines from your lyrics that people will remember for years after they hear it.
A good example of one of my favorite Quotables, came in a Rap Battle that happened about a year ago. It was Pat Stay VS. Hollahan. The two emcees were really going at it and then Pat dropped a Quotable out the gate that Hollahan couldn’t recover from.
I don’t remember the filler-Lines he used to setup the punch-line but I will remember this punch-line until the day I die.
“he sniffs coke thru the pen that he writes with,
To fully understand the power of this punch-line you need to have some understanding of metaphors and knowledge on the history between the two rappers, but those bars completely changed the energy in the room and left everybody stunned.
Rapping is all about what you’re saying and how you’re saying it. Therefore lyrical content should match the emotional undertone of the instrumental and vice versa. If you are writing your lyrics to an instrumental that’s already arranged and the instrumental feels like upbeat dance music, then the lyrical content should reflect that instrumental’s feel.
The Hook/chorus should embody the main focus of the song. Great hook lyrics are catchy, often repeated, and easy to remember. They should be clear, concise, and on point because the hook is the most important part of the song!
The Verse should support the lyrical content of the hook, but this is also the time when rappers get to display their lyrical skills and show off their mastery of rapping. This is when you hit your listeners with haymaking punch-lines and mind bending wordplay.
Try to always be conscious of your lyrical content. If you start rattling off a bunch of unrelated nonsense its harder for your listeners to follow along.
Writing well-structured lyrics is a vital step in learning how to rap. Using the tools mentioned above you are now armed with the knowledge to write great rap lyrics in any circumstance. Get to work and take your lyric writing to the next level and remember… rapping is all about what your saying and how you’re saying it.
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